Stella reviews you-are-next-rp Overall: The theme is okay, but a bit clashing with colors. I re
Stella reviews you-are-next-rp Overall: The theme is okay, but a bit clashing with colors. I really don’t like all the gifs used on admin posts, but at least the sidebar image matches the theme colors… sort of. I have no idea what the date on the sidebar means, nor what the explanation is, but I guess it’s something important– maybe it’ll be explained in the plot. Appearance: The theme is nice, but I don’t like the yellow streaks. I suggest making them fit in more by making the text the same color, or just getting rid of the yellow altogether. The sidebar image is a bit too light a shade of purple to match the theme, but it’s better than not matching at all, I guess. I feel like this was the default color scheme, and you tried to make everything match, but it didn’t work out. I suggest getting a color palette done by an RPH. Structure: I had a hard time getting through the plot. You had a lot of run-on sentences that could have been fixed with a couple commas, and your verb tenses continuously changed back and forth from present to past tense. I’m not sure what the story is exactly about, but I guess it might be about the murders in a small town, and now no one is safe from the killing? You did a poor job of wrapping up the plot and explaining, so I suggest you rewrite the plot, and try to make the graphics fit a bit better with the theme, instead of having bright orange contrasting with purple and yellow. But once I went to the bios, expecting the worst, I was pleasantly surprised. You have good graphics, and your bios are excellent, if not a bit short. But the interview format is always a nice take on the typical bio format, and I don’t mind it too much. My only suggestion is lengthening the bio part just a little hair. Mechanics: I’m not going to lie, I feel a bit cheated. I went to the page, and found that your admin is very kind and helpful. Why, then, would she leave so much to desire with the RP? Even then, the number of gifs you use to respond to every little thing is distracting and grates on my eyes– I’m afraid that your RP needs some serious work. Fix the things I’ve mentioned, and I’ll gladly do another review. But for now, I say that you aren’t nearly the best, but aren’t quite the worst. Keep trucking, and I hope you can improve quite a bit. -- source link
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