First 250 Words Smash! #50 Most Wonderful Author: NidoranMost Evil Critique Master: SarahWorking Tit
First 250 Words Smash! #50 Most Wonderful Author: NidoranMost Evil Critique Master: SarahWorking Title: Thief Kaslen always thought herself to be a very good thief. The guards who caught her stealing, however, did not.She sat on a wooden bench in a dank prison cell so old that moss grew between the stones that made up the floor and walls. The cell had a single window, only a foot tall and twice as wide with iron bars added to obstruct both the view and any chance at escape.She’d only been there a few hours (not even long enough to get a meal of stale bread and murky water), and her sentence wasn’t a long one. For the crime of stealing a single apple from a stall in the market, her punishment was to be imprisoned for one night or lose a hand. Being an intelligent thief in addition to a very good thief, Kaslen chose the former. If you’re wondering if you’re starting your story in the right place, we’ve got some things to think about. Read the rest of this intro and what we have to say on the bloggity blog! (And if you have no idea what this word smash thingy is, read this.) -- source link
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