First 250 Words Smash! #46 Most Wonderful Author: Erin CoplandMost Evil Critique Master: AnnieWorkin
First 250 Words Smash! #46 Most Wonderful Author: Erin CoplandMost Evil Critique Master: AnnieWorking Title: N/A Zaima could hear a woman screaming from outside the door. She didn’t bother knocking, but limped into the little cottage and paused on the threshold. There was a scent of blood and stale sweat, and the feeble candlelight barely illuminated the main room, just enough to show a man sitting at a table.“Good evening, Goodman Tanner.”“Took you long enough.”“I’m afraid my mule has a bad leg, so I had to—” A woman’s scream cut her off. “Well. I’m here now.”Zaima moved to go into the back bedroom, but he blocked her way. LOOK! The first critique from our new KSW Team! Read the rest of the intro and Annie’s thoughts about unpacking setting and working on pacing on the bloggity blog. The other Teamers have been hard at work, so new intros will be going up soon. Submissions are still open, but only for a limited amount of spaces. Make sure you read through the guidelines carefully before submitting to us, and if you realized you messed up, you can always resubmit as long as we’re open. (And if you have no idea what this word smash thing is, read this!) -- source link
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