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ringofkees: silkys-kitten: lizzidoll: shaman58: shaman58: dreamingsilently: bannableoffense: hypdom: This is always true, right? It’s so hard to resist when you’re resisting because the more you resist the deeper you go… the deeper This would be perfect if the grammar nazi in me wasn’t screaming out to go *deeper “The more you resist,” I said to my captive, “The more deeper you go.” She laughed at me. She actually laughed at me. She was shackled to the chair facing the screen on which the spiral turned inexorably. I completely had the upper hand. She would be mine. And she was laughing at me. “What’s so funny?” I said. “Your grammar sucks! ‘Deeper,’ not ‘more deeper.’ Maybe, just maybe, if you wanted to keep the symmetry with ‘the more you resist,’ you could say ‘the more deep you go.’ But even that is rather awkward.” “So,” I said. “Grammar matters to you.” “Bad grammar matters. You will never hypnotize me if you keep jarring me by saying awful things like ‘the more deeper you go.’” She was bound to my chair. The spiral turned inexorably. She would be mine. I knew I could find a way. “I don’t suppose you could help me out here,” I said with a plaintive note in my voice. “How about you correct my grammar? I say something, and you tell me if I’ve got it right. If I’m wrong, say it correctly.” “Unless you have another idea, I don’t have anything better to do.” “How about surrendering and falling under my hypnotic spell?” She snorted. “Not going to happen.” “Let’s go ahead with the grammar lesson, then.” I paused to think. “How about this: ‘Bad grammar need correcting.’” “Bad grammar needs correcting,” she said. She was bound to my chair. The spiral turned inexorably. She would be mine. I had found my way. “Correct your grammar make I feel better.” She sighed. “Correcting your grammar makes me feel better.” “I cain’t let bad grammar go.” “I cannot let bad grammar go.” “I enjoy the feeling by correcting you grammar.” “Hmmm.” She hesitated for a moment. “I enjoy the feeling of correcting your grammar.” She smiled. She actually smiled! “The spiral pull me in.” “Wait – I see what you’re doing here.” “The spiral pull me in.” “I won’t say that.” “Correcting you grammar is very compulsion.” “Correcting your grammar is very compelling.” “Me cannot resist correct you grammar.” “I cannot resist correcting your grammar.” “The spiral pull me in.” “The – No!” “'The spiral pull me in.’ Can’t you feel it, how the disagreement between the subject and verb is so very irritating? You have to fix it. It will feel so good when you do. Again. ‘The spiral pull me in.’” “The spiral … pulls … me in.” “That’s so much better, isn’t it? Try this: ‘I not resist can fixing your grammar.’” “I cannot resist fixing your grammar.” “I not resist can pull the spiral.” “I cannot resist – NO!” “What can’t you resist: the pull after the spiral? The pull above the spiral?” She struggled with herself for a moment. “… the pull … of … the spiral.” “I not resist can pull the spiral.” She sighed. “I cannot resist the pull of the spiral.” “The more I resist, the more deeper I go.” “The more I resist, the deeper I go.” Her voice was a monotone now.“ “Me secret want your hypnotized me.” “I secretly want you … to hypnotize me.” “It’s more easier if me surrenders now.” “It’s even easier if I surrender now.” “Me surrender now.” “I surrender now – Oh. I really do. I surrender now.” Her head sagged. She was chained to my chair. The spiral turned inexorably. She was mine. Reblogged for @lizzidoll Yes, this was one of the stories I first loved from you Shaman. Mostly because of how effective this induction would be for half of my friendship group I majored in English as an undergraduate and this story appeals to me on *so* many levels Ooh I like~ -- source link
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